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Deception of Smoke and Light by ~bobmk2:iconbobmk2:



                                                  The Being
To fully understand the nature of such a diabolical creature, I thought to tell you his tale.

In his former life, the being was nothing more than a normal man working in a small factory in, from what we have heard to have been a prosperous city, on the western hemisphere of the world. He was well off, but all he wanted to do was keep his family well, fed and to protect them no matter what the cost. Which unfortunately happen faster than he would have liked. A war broke out on the western hemisphere and to save his family he joined up to the army, thinking he was doing this for the good of him and his family but knowing otherwise... Deep within himself.

During the course of the war, which involved just the major city that the man was living in and every other country on that hemisphere, He was chosen to lead a daring assault on a major base that they had constructed. Roughly where the factory is at the present moment in time. All was going well, this group of men he was leading all got in silently no alarms as smooth as any well planned operation. Until one man betrayed them and all the alarms went off. Guards were everywhere, and he got captured and was a prisoner of war. Years and years went past and without contact from family or anyone in the outside world he didn’t know what was going on.

Luckily for him a deadly plague swept through the hemisphere and wiped out everyone and everything and he was safe. The other hemisphere, not wanting the plague to sweep through and devastate their lands like it did theirs, ordered for every part of the world to be burnt to a cinder. After this massive scale burning the doors to his prison under the ground gave way and he was free. He was free in this barren, wasteland, which was his home, burnt, scared and destroyed with no signs of life.

He, being just a normal factory worker had no idea on how to get from, what seemed to be nowhere to somewhere else that look exactly the same as the place before. So he journeyed for however long he could on the amount of food he had saved from his years of captivity. He kept on walking and walking until he collapsed with sheer fatigue and exhaustion.

He woke up after an uncountable amount of time during his slumber and jumped up instantly, he looked at the wall chart next to him and found it to be 5 years later, which he was naturally shocked by. Especially when his muscles should have become so weak that they shouldn’t be able to lift him up… but they did.

Looking down at his body he thought he would see withered skin with bones poking out because of the weight loss, but he didn’t. What he did see was the gigantic mechanical structure that he is now seen as today.  The scientists instructed this person to carry out their will so they could get the resources to carry on their research for more bigger better creations to do their will faster and with less effort.

Unfortunately the scientist didn’t calculate the chances of him not doing their will, so this creature started getting his reputation as a remorseless killer with them. He then escaped with minimal effort out of their facility and out into the barren wasteland of the western hemisphere. Now with the help of the departed scientists he could run across that barren land for days and days without being tired. But this did come at a price; he now had a never-ending cough and sounded like he had difficulty breathing. His frame for his body was too massive in stature and he had the most evil piercing eyes. And since he now has no family he can return to and no friends anymore he had no reason to stop his malice and destruction.

He eventually found out the cause of the plague and to his shock and to the greater shock of the passer by, that he found he had caused the plague, which wiped out his friends and family to try and rescue him from imprisonment but it spread to quickly and violently for them to control, which was why, it wiped out so many people. The reason why it was a shock to the passer by that told the mechanical beast this information was that he was killed in his rage of him finding this out.

From that moment on, he had stopped calling himself by his human and original name but he started going by no name what so ever and his goal was to strike fear into every living being and destroy them all for the loss of his own life and family. His original name was…







Sounded at first like cries of other men and women as the plummeted downward with them, but since they had eternity to figure this out, they listened patiently and carefully and found them to be the beings of light talking to each other and they seem to be laughing at them like they were in the wrong or something. Then one spirit came close to one of the men whispered something. A happy smile lit up his face and then…
©2007-2008 ~bobmk2
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Second Chapter of my Story.
Slowly editing it as i go a post it up.
Take care
And someone please comment! :P

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~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: Dec 17, 2007, 5:07:49 PM
I comment. i liked it very much, but there were point i suppose you could elaborate slightly. but other than that you're very good.

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~bobmk2:iconbobmk2: Dec 17, 2007, 5:24:01 PM
At what points exactly?

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